You saunter (no other
word would describe
the lilt of your gait quite
so eloquently) toward
me, smiling. You tilt
your head in question:
"What are you doing?" The question
remains unanswered. You ask another:
"Why are you upside down?" I tilt
my head toward you. "Describe
'upside down.'" You lean toward
me: "you." I beam "Not quite!"
"Not-" (I interrupt) "Quite!
Not at all, in fact. Your question
is invalid." You seem to lean toward
cuffing me, but you repeat the other
question, your first. So I describe
why I am laying, on a dock with a tilt,
my head limp over the edge: "The tilt
and the view flipped around cannot quite
The Trouble with a Love Poem by Robsonnet, literature
Literature
The Trouble with a Love Poem
Ever since that first cave man told the woman of his fancy, "Looking at you makes me want to say something where all the words end with the same sound," and then clubbed her and dragged her off to his cave to show her his etchings, most people's first poetic efforts have been expressions of fondness and desire.
And no matter how bad the poem is, when the feeling is mutual, the response is going to be very reinforcing. "You wrote me a POEM?! Oh, it's BEAUTIFUL! That's so SWEET!" Et cetera, et cetera, with kisses.
At this point, the love poem is perfect. It communicated the desired message, and it had the desired effect. But then, with the be
I know your name;
It is wet wind through thick
leaves on warm nights.
Our pensive heart, drawn on the worn
thin velvet pages of my favorite books.
I wear your soul like a cloak
against what-ifs and listen wholly
to the crickets I
robbed you of.
The Painter And The Veteran by FallingAsleepTonight, literature
Literature
The Painter And The Veteran
He wanted to pull out the pain
with a syringe, as if it were
black jelly that had accumulated
underneath his skin. This was
how morning welcomed him.
***
On saturday nights, he was
the kind of man who went around town
painting murals with a can. They
were gorgeous, especially when city
employees melted them with hose-water.
***
In America you can find dollar bills
stuck deep in the cracks between
sidewalks; you can find people stuck
deep in the cracks between
buildings too.
***
You can also find people inside
said buildings, inside beds,
inside...
***
One
and only one
night, the painter was approached
by a hairy young
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They took the needle to me when I was a foetus. They tried to make the prettiest design they could, but it was destined for failure. He had a large ego and wouldn't rest until some part of the design was an exact copy of his. Passing on his bloodline's coat of arms wasn't good enough for him. She agreed as long as she could design the relatively insignificant part of the design that remained.
The design was one of the first things I learned to draw.
It's you they told me so you must always wear it with pride.
I tried; I swear; I tried; but it was always right there on my face, staring out at the world. We held each other pris